Ditto what Jackie said. This is a truly wonderful hiaku. When I was a poetry editor and judged the haiku contests,this would have the top prize. You really do have "it." Writing haiku looks deceptively simple but it takes a rare talent to capture its essence so perfectly. Congratulations!
The best haiku I've read yet in the blogathon. You are a born poet, Jenny.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jackie! For some reason, though, I can't stop myself from imagining that mine is the first one you clicked on today... ;)
DeleteDitto what Jackie said. This is a truly wonderful hiaku. When I was a poetry editor and judged the haiku contests,this would have the top prize. You really do have "it." Writing haiku looks deceptively simple but it takes a rare talent to capture its essence so perfectly. Congratulations!
DeleteWow, thanks Peggy!
DeleteThanks for prepping me for 7 years of hell.
ReplyDeleteSo very, very true!!
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